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Tonic goes to dominant

Or perhaps that is reversed

Sub-dom goes to tonic like

The church hymn’s benediction

 

The mediant wanders on

Marching: three, six, two, five, one

Jazz aficionados swing

Classical musicians roll

Their eyes- their souls vacating.

 

No one dares resolve with TI

Without SO or RE or Fa

One glorious dominant

Seventh chord slithers into

Heavenly DO MI SO DO

Date: 2019-10-01 10:54 pm (UTC)
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Writing poetry to fit a certain scheme (7 syllables per line) can be very difficult, but it forces a certain creativity in word choice that doesn't exist in free verse. You did a great job.

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